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Thesis: All college students should have part-time jobs.

Ⅰ： I have three reasons to proof all college students should have part-time job.

A: helps students know how to balance and manage their time.

a.       Tell the reasons

b.      Example from my life.

B: a part-time job is helpful to them to have healthy opinion of money.

a.       Tell why

b.      Give resources

c.       Explain and analyze this resources

d.      Other resources

C: The third advantage to have a part-time job is that college students could learn good communication skills, and learn how to work with and help other people kindly and effectively.

a.       Tell why

b.      Give resources

Ⅱ：Opposition:

 Just as a coin has its two sides, there are some disadvantages for a college student to have a part-time job.

a.       Give reason

b.      Explain

 

Ⅲ： Conclusion:

We may not be really incomplete if we don’t have part-time jobs, but the jobs can make our lives more integrated.